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To start of , I am new to story writing here, but have a regular vistor and active is checking up on stories posted on the forum. So after long time reading stories , I thought I should try my hand in posting few of the stories that I have experienced ( fantasy & real story). So I am making a start now, I hope readers help me by giving me feedback on improvements to be made.
Firstly I shall introduce the myself I am Rahul a working professional, who loves experiences various events in life. I am 5 11 and have a atheletic body, basically involved in lot of football and being kid being outdoor. This story is about the fantasy I had with a classmate of mine , who was my friend, but we had lost contact due to certain misunderstandings. Her name is Disha, a conservative Brahmin girl who was fair n beautiful and had a perfect figure so to right. She had lips thats reminded me of lips similar to that of Priyanka chopra(actress). During college days I used to crave to kiss her on her lips, although we were just friends and and she had no clue about my desires. A very innocent girl , who could not differentiate between a flirticious talk and a genuine friendly talk. I took this as an advantage and made comments on her figure to her to which she used to blush. Oh wait! She had one of the best navel I have ever seen of a girl, fair and little meaty but not all that plump as well just about perfect. I did compliment her on her navel couple of times to her and said its so seductive, to which she had replies her typical style go man, your mad. That smile used to make me weak on my knees.
As days passed and months during college, we happened to fall prey to several misunderstandings which lead to us ending up not speaking to each other. This continued even after college, and one day I got to know that she got married to a rich ugly contractor, I was disappointed and thought to myself what a waste of genuine beauty. so after a couple years I got in contact with her through facebook, which led to increase in the number of times we contacted each other followed by whats app chats. The fanatasy had already began in my head, the start for it was by chat by her in which she said she wanted to go on cruise ship.
To cut the initially build up I would directly start with the story that I want to share.
6 months later
One fine day I was informed in my office that I had on the lucky prize of from the credit card package that I had and it was a trip to singapore on a cruise ship 7 days . this was compete surprise to me as I had never expected anything like this as I was always hard on any luck coming my side. As I was digesting the surprise I suddenly remembered Dishas wish on going on a cruise ship, I hurriedly got in contact with her via text msg and told her that I have won prize trip on a cruise ship to Singapore , to which she replied really!!!.. I thought for a second why is she getting so excited about my trip, then she cracked it to me that even she and her husband have booked to go on the same cruise now that was some news for me.. my excitement about the trip multiply 10 folds when I got to know that even she would be in the ship...
A month later the day had come where we had to go on the trip and I had packed well, and was all ready for great experience we met at the port where our cruise was supposed to be and I saw her after 4 long years, she looked as beautiful as she was before, but just that post marriage she had gained a little weight, which by no means made her look bad. I was awe-struck at her n just wanted to hug her , when the suddenly I realized there was a giant figure just next to her. I got introduced to him , he was her husband.. man the guy looks like hogg.. a thought came to my mind while I shook hands with him, what had gone wrong with her when she agreed to married him.. after the formal introduction we proceeded to our berth, were we were welcomed by the captain and the staff of the cruise and after a delay of about half hour the cruise set sail and all clapped in joy..
It was only after the few hours and after dinner and I got to see her again, she had changed by then .. she had changed from the black saree she had worn (in which she looked gorgeous) to a t-shirt and jeans, this was the first time I saw her in t-shirt and jeans (she was conservative girl back in college).. I could enjoy more at the sight of her.. I immediately texted her saying that she is looking gorgeous and she hasnt lost any of her beauty since college.. she replied back in smileys.. then I thought of sending her another text to check her reaction as I wanted to get closer to her.. I texted her that damn she is looking so hot and I wish it was me beside her as her husband , what a romantic get away it would have been.. I waited for her reply, she took a while and replied saying.. Rahul you na havent changed yes but this is indeed a romantic experience. This reply assured me that she does still take me lightly and had not changed . then after sometime as there was music n drinks on the deck .. all were dancing I met her again , she was with her husband.. I could control and swiftly whispered in her ears while her husband looked away I want to talk to you, meet me alone at the upper level.. she was surprised .. I held my words and waited for her husband to look away, but then he suddenly got a call on his phone n turned aside, I then quickly told her Ill be waiting for you half hour from now at 11.. please do come.. and I left .. leaving her puzzled..
As I had to plan as to what I conversation I had to have with her I went to the upper level with a champagne bottle and was waiting for her. I waited, it was 11 and no sign of her , I thought lets wait for some more time and it was 11:45 no sign of her, and I thought that she wouldnt turn up and the by the time I decided to leave the place it was 12 . I was just about leaving the upper level of the cruise while I got a text from her, hey! Are you still waiting for me ???.. I was happy to atleast get some response and said yes I have been waiting for you.. to which she did not reply.. I waited for another 10 mins and then there she appeared from the stairs I was delighted at seeing her respond to my call.. as I had thought in back of my mind that she would not come as I had asked her.
To be continued
To start of , I am new to story writing here, but have a regular vistor and active is checking up on stories posted on the forum. So after long time reading stories , I thought I should try my hand in posting few of the stories that I have experienced ( fantasy & real story). So I am making a start now, I hope readers help me by giving me feedback on improvements to be made.
Firstly I shall introduce the myself I am Rahul a working professional, who loves experiences various events in life. I am 5 11 and have a atheletic body, basically involved in lot of football and being kid being outdoor. This story is about the fantasy I had with a classmate of mine , who was my friend, but we had lost contact due to certain misunderstandings. Her name is Disha, a conservative Brahmin girl who was fair n beautiful and had a perfect figure so to right. She had lips thats reminded me of lips similar to that of Priyanka chopra(actress). During college days I used to crave to kiss her on her lips, although we were just friends and and she had no clue about my desires. A very innocent girl , who could not differentiate between a flirticious talk and a genuine friendly talk. I took this as an advantage and made comments on her figure to her to which she used to blush. Oh wait! She had one of the best navel I have ever seen of a girl, fair and little meaty but not all that plump as well just about perfect. I did compliment her on her navel couple of times to her and said its so seductive, to which she had replies her typical style go man, your mad. That smile used to make me weak on my knees.
As days passed and months during college, we happened to fall prey to several misunderstandings which lead to us ending up not speaking to each other. This continued even after college, and one day I got to know that she got married to a rich ugly contractor, I was disappointed and thought to myself what a waste of genuine beauty. so after a couple years I got in contact with her through facebook, which led to increase in the number of times we contacted each other followed by whats app chats. The fanatasy had already began in my head, the start for it was by chat by her in which she said she wanted to go on cruise ship.
To cut the initially build up I would directly start with the story that I want to share.
6 months later
One fine day I was informed in my office that I had on the lucky prize of from the credit card package that I had and it was a trip to singapore on a cruise ship 7 days . this was compete surprise to me as I had never expected anything like this as I was always hard on any luck coming my side. As I was digesting the surprise I suddenly remembered Dishas wish on going on a cruise ship, I hurriedly got in contact with her via text msg and told her that I have won prize trip on a cruise ship to Singapore , to which she replied really!!!.. I thought for a second why is she getting so excited about my trip, then she cracked it to me that even she and her husband have booked to go on the same cruise now that was some news for me.. my excitement about the trip multiply 10 folds when I got to know that even she would be in the ship...
A month later the day had come where we had to go on the trip and I had packed well, and was all ready for great experience we met at the port where our cruise was supposed to be and I saw her after 4 long years, she looked as beautiful as she was before, but just that post marriage she had gained a little weight, which by no means made her look bad. I was awe-struck at her n just wanted to hug her , when the suddenly I realized there was a giant figure just next to her. I got introduced to him , he was her husband.. man the guy looks like hogg.. a thought came to my mind while I shook hands with him, what had gone wrong with her when she agreed to married him.. after the formal introduction we proceeded to our berth, were we were welcomed by the captain and the staff of the cruise and after a delay of about half hour the cruise set sail and all clapped in joy..
It was only after the few hours and after dinner and I got to see her again, she had changed by then .. she had changed from the black saree she had worn (in which she looked gorgeous) to a t-shirt and jeans, this was the first time I saw her in t-shirt and jeans (she was conservative girl back in college).. I could enjoy more at the sight of her.. I immediately texted her saying that she is looking gorgeous and she hasnt lost any of her beauty since college.. she replied back in smileys.. then I thought of sending her another text to check her reaction as I wanted to get closer to her.. I texted her that damn she is looking so hot and I wish it was me beside her as her husband , what a romantic get away it would have been.. I waited for her reply, she took a while and replied saying.. Rahul you na havent changed yes but this is indeed a romantic experience. This reply assured me that she does still take me lightly and had not changed . then after sometime as there was music n drinks on the deck .. all were dancing I met her again , she was with her husband.. I could control and swiftly whispered in her ears while her husband looked away I want to talk to you, meet me alone at the upper level.. she was surprised .. I held my words and waited for her husband to look away, but then he suddenly got a call on his phone n turned aside, I then quickly told her Ill be waiting for you half hour from now at 11.. please do come.. and I left .. leaving her puzzled..
As I had to plan as to what I conversation I had to have with her I went to the upper level with a champagne bottle and was waiting for her. I waited, it was 11 and no sign of her , I thought lets wait for some more time and it was 11:45 no sign of her, and I thought that she wouldnt turn up and the by the time I decided to leave the place it was 12 . I was just about leaving the upper level of the cruise while I got a text from her, hey! Are you still waiting for me ???.. I was happy to atleast get some response and said yes I have been waiting for you.. to which she did not reply.. I waited for another 10 mins and then there she appeared from the stairs I was delighted at seeing her respond to my call.. as I had thought in back of my mind that she would not come as I had asked her.
To be continued